I’m getting pretty close to finishing the story with this version. I may add another stanza or so to the end, but we’ll see how it goes tomorrow after I sleep on it.

I like some of the storm analogies that I’ve added, but I don’t want it to be too over the top. (Yeah, we get it! He’s like a Hurricane. Jeez!)

I’m also getting a better idea of the emotion I want to convey as I read it. It gets easier with every take.

Current text: Hurricane ver. 5