I added a couple of more lines today. About 8, I guess.
The story is definitely getting darker and the tension is building.
I’m pretty sure the story will end badly, but there’s not much that I can do about that, since it seems to be writing itself. I’m just the narrator.

Here’s the latest text of the poem: Hurricane ver. 4

Less than a week to get the finished product over to Simon. (Eeek!)